Headwaters
And a question of where poetry belongs
I have written poems for decades, published a few, and self-published many. However, I have never considered submitting a poem to a peer-reviewed medical journal.
A brave they/them has done just that and had a poem titled "They was Patient" recently published in Health Promotion Practice and shared by Colin Wright on X.
This poem is said to promote public health by promoting "the irreverence of gender euphoria."
In response, I submit one of my poems to the public health discourse. Perhaps it too deserves a place in a medical peer reviewed journal. I will let you all be the judge.
Headwaters
Nietzche I have never read
your intellect can lap my mile splits
best times
but
In this time
a barge on the Mississippi
is constant
or is it incessantly churning
Northern bound
to the headwaters
to the beginning, which is the end
Can we make the trip with
stamina enough to reconstruct these bodies sacred
or at least to stop the churning out of more damage
When does a person
become the person ready
how can we stroke though to the bottom of that
murky mighty water
Can we bring the reckoning?
Modernism to postmodernism happened at
3:32pm on July 15, 1972
when Pruitt Igoe was torn down
Postmodernism swallowed me whole
the first time I plunged a 14 gauge needle
filled with viscous testosterone cypionate
into a woman in my bed
Regardless of when
a person becomes ready to be put back to the body sacred
Let us travel to the beginning
which is the end




Spelling Nietzsche's name wrong right out of the gate doesn't bode well for this poem. I know, I'm a snob. It's not a spelling bee. it's about gender, holiest-on-high.
Question: What's so "brave" about submitting a poem to a peer-reviewed medical journal? If it weren't published, we wouldn't be talking about it at all, but it was published, which means They got what They wanted: validation from Science. The same Science which lies to parents and kids about the purpose and safety of surgeries and cross-sex hormones.
If nothing else, the journal must document that all the scientists who reviewed this poem are peers of the poet; at very least, queer.
Otherwise, I'm calling the FDA.
I like it~! The meaning- at least for me- was clear, I feel it. I, too, am a poet in a different part of the health field. I think a lot of 'creatives' are drawn to nurturing others.~