I have written poems for decades, published a few, and self-published many. However, I have never considered submitting a poem to a peer-reviewed medical journal.
A brave they/them has done just that and had a poem titled "They was Patient" recently published in Health Promotion Practice and shared by Colin Wright on X.
This poem is said to promote public health by promoting "the irreverence of gender euphoria."
In response, I submit one of my poems to the public health discourse. Perhaps it too deserves a place in a medical peer reviewed journal. I will let you all be the judge.
HeadwatersÂ
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Nietzche I have never readÂ
your intellect can lap my mile splits
best times
but Â
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In this timeÂ
a barge on the MississippiÂ
is constantÂ
or is it incessantly churningÂ
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Northern boundÂ
to the headwatersÂ
to the beginning, which is the endÂ
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Can we make the trip withÂ
stamina enough to reconstruct these bodies sacredÂ
or at least to stop the churning out of more damageÂ
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When does a personÂ
become the person readyÂ
how can we stroke though to the bottom of that
murky mighty waterÂ
Â
Can we bring the reckoning?Â
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Modernism to postmodernism happened atÂ
3:32pm on July 15, 1972
when Pruitt Igoe was torn downÂ
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Postmodernism swallowed me whole
the first time I plunged a 14 gauge needle
filled with viscous testosterone cypionateÂ
into a woman in my bedÂ
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Regardless of whenÂ
a person becomes ready to be put back to the body sacredÂ
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Let us travel to the beginningÂ
which is the end
Spelling Nietzsche's name wrong right out of the gate doesn't bode well for this poem. I know, I'm a sob. It's not a spelling bee. it's about gender, holiest-on-high.
Question: What's so "brave" about submitting a poem to a peer-reviewed medical journal? If it weren't published, we wouldn't be talking about it at all, but it was published, which means They got what They wanted: validation from Science. The same Science which lies to parents and kids about the purpose and safety of surgeries and cross-sex hormones.
If nothing else, the journal must document that all the scientists who reviewed this poem are peers of the poet; at very least, queer.
Otherwise, I'm calling the FDA.
This made me think of my wife.